Free write

Well I probably made something really awkward between me and one of my friends but I'm not in the mood to talk about it. Well I came up with a wicked part in for my book. Here let me elaborate. The main character Atlas, is forced to be sent off from a failing space station that can harness the power of the sun, or it might be some super advanced laboratory I haven't decided yet. He is forced out of the space station by Shining Star, Atlas's first intergalactic girl friend. She is a genus and was working on the space station.

Well something went wrong, everyone had to leave but Shining Star had to stay behind to minimize the super nova by acceleration the black hole which would have ultimately would have happened. So here is the piece of it.

Alarms going off, lights flashing, automated voice rang out "Gravity level stability, failure. Radiation level stability, failure. Ultimate destruction intimate. Retreat to minimal safe distance. This is not a drill repeat this is not a drill." Only that wasn't true Atlas thought. This repeated over and over again as Atlas ran down the corridor to the bridge. He wished that this was all a dream and he would be waking up any second, laying by Shining Star. She would be comforting him telling him it was only a dream. At the vary least he wished that this was a drill, at the vary least. But no this wasn't a drill, the station rumbled to as what seemed like explosions. Something was obviously vary wrong.

So there you go something to absorb and to wonder about. And please tell me what you think about this little bit of my book.